Frist post, short peom

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sininabin, Jun 13, 2005.

  1. Sininabin

    Sininabin Member

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    Since for some reason my thread won't let me copy and paste i just write my shortest poem and see what people think

    "Rhyming to Hell"
    Taking a wiff
    Losing my grip
    Lighting a fag
    Taking a drag
    Dizzy as hell
    It's ringing a bell
    Going down
    Feeling low
    Flying with life's flow
    Taking a wiff
    Drifting away
    Taking a lick
    Starting to sway
    Recollecting deeds
    Buring my bridges
    Staning my future
    Closing the road
    With every shot i take
    I'm making another stain
    Upon my tarnished recorded
    Lost in libraries
    Closing the gate
    Killing the light
    No where to run
    I can't possibly live the fight
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    wow, good poem. like the rhyming you've used.
     
  3. Baby Fire-fly

    Baby Fire-fly Member

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    Love it! I like how it develops.
     
  4. Sininabin

    Sininabin Member

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    dude you guys are way to kind, but thank you
     
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