Sometimes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by thoughtless_wanderer, Jun 15, 2005.

  1. thoughtless_wanderer

    thoughtless_wanderer Member

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    I seek silence
    pure and unobliterated
    where heartbeats are felt
    and the light so divine...
    all encompassing
    slowly slipping backwards
    wondering what it felt like
    in the womb
    the sounds of water moving
    perhaps permeating
    the languid atmosphere
    and soothing
    the restless fingertips
    and twitching lids
    surrounded entirely
    by the real
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    'unobliterated' and 'languid' hehe love those words! good description and image you've created. nice concise piece too:)
     

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