forgotten

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mysti, Jun 15, 2005.

  1. mysti

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    picture this. its you if you were me...
    trapped,
    lost in a corner of time,
    suffocating,
    praying for deliverance.

    your wounds are growing worse,
    your hands are going numb,
    you promise yourself you will look no further,
    but somehow you find a way.

    you scream,
    your heart pounds as it tells you
    dont look down and dont look back.
    you feel that you are growing calice to this place.

    shame and decite fill your thoughts as the smoke fills your lungs,
    all of the screams you make out of agony are drowned out by the silence.
    your emotions run dry.
    you sit and stare at the broken wall waiting for this season to end as the fire dies from within.

    how do u like it?
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    ooo this is a different direction to take...

    about smoking or something? or metaphorical smoking....something inside you is burning up maybe?
     
  3. mysti

    mysti Member

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    inside is on fire
     
  4. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    ouch:(
     
  5. mysti

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    hahahahhaha very funny... its a metaphore
     
  6. mysti

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    it means like anger and hate and other not ''happy'' feelings
     
  7. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    again...ouchy! not heartburn then?:p
     
  8. mysti

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    in a way i guess it could b but in a sence, no... u get the basic idea tho... right?
     
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