one more slow dance, boy with blue eyes, and untitled

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mysti, Jun 16, 2005.

  1. mysti

    mysti Member

    Messages:
    166
    Likes Received:
    0
    one more slow dance

    swaying gently
    spinning slowly
    i feel you there,
    all i see is you.
    are you the one sent to help me through?

    just one more slow dance is all i ask
    in your love i can bask
    i love the way you look at me
    you fill my heart with pride and glee

    the music stops but can i depart?
    my arms locked around you,
    we flow around and around,
    your voice is the only sound.

    i can only feel you,
    and you feel me too,
    step by step we turn

    your cologne is the only scent
    your hand the only pressure
    your eyes burning holes in me,
    do you see right through me?

    our love will always prevail,
    untill you decide you like that girl and bail,
    are all of the guys the same?
    are you all so vein?



    Untitled

    tomorrow will come yes i know,
    but today seems so long.
    i decided to sit and write you a song,
    i havent talked to you for so long.
    i miss your friend to friend embrace,
    i know it is you i should chase.
    i love you so but you dont know me
    i see you but you dont see me
    i need you,
    do you need me?
    do you notice me anymore?
    do you remember that day i confessed my love to you,
    do you know how many emotions i went through?
    i said 'i love you' and you said you loved me to,
    but that you are promised to someone else.
    do you love her,
    or is it true,
    im just old news to you?
    i call all the tim but you can never talk,
    why are you avoiding me?
    dont you know,
    i still love you.



    boy with blue eyes

    to the boy with blue eyes who can only speak lies,
    i have no compromise.
    you set me up so i would fall,
    you took advantage and laughed at my downpour.
    you are a sorry excuse for a human.

    you steal girls one innosence,
    i fear your touch,
    your slightest glance send me running,
    how could you do this to me?
    i dont claim my identity.

    go away,
    leave me be,
    i dont want your company.
    forgiveness will be here eventually,
    but for now,
    stay away from me!

    you chain me down,
    you profound little creep,
    you make me stay quiet,
    not one peep.
    i cant leave,
    i cant stay,
    why do you have to be this way?

    for the boy with blue eyes,
    im leaving you behind.


    tada! old work
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

    Messages:
    2,905
    Likes Received:
    1
    all 3 of theses are good, quite a similar style. my favourite is the boy with blue eyes.
     

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice