Swaying along the hinges

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Rafaela, Jun 19, 2005.

  1. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    Swaying along the hinges
    of the drunken puppeteer.
    Concepts nothing more,
    Then bedroom walls
    To shield the light.
    Thoughts of my fatalistic girl
    projected across my fancy.
    Flashing figures
    consumed by scarlet kisses.
    Lipstick smeared
    along her neck's horizon.
    Lust had gambled its patience,
    Played the bargain
    and lost.
    You're beautiful,
    In two degrees plus infinite.
     
    Rafaela, Jun 19, 2005
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  3. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    this is kinda a leery swaying poem that is vague yet clear. tis great, whatever it is!:)
     
    Lozi, Jun 19, 2005
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    2 + 0 = 2 = 0
     
    osiris, Jun 19, 2005
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