Depressed Self Pitty

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by WynterFrost, Jun 22, 2005.

  1. WynterFrost

    WynterFrost Short Bus Rider

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    Depressed Self Pitty
    You look at life running by fast
    All those years of mixed emotions are coming agian
    but wont last

    Pushing yourself to get up each day
    Tellin yourself you should change
    Not live this way

    These people who talk dont know anything
    Each little word still hurting something
    Relationships crash
    Kicking you down throwing you away like trash

    Everything hits so fast
    Making you hide away being afraid of whats in the past
    Hiding , waiting for a hand for a help out
    Never seeing it cause you are blinded by doubt

    Im sorry Im not there
    Those pictures of you I see are hard to bare
    Sitting there so pretty
    yet drowned by lifes self pitty
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    its getting published soon....
    oh boy....
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Congrats on getting published!
     
  3. WynterFrost

    WynterFrost Short Bus Rider

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    thank you .......I like ur sig....
     
  4. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    uhhhhh ya know "pity" is spelled "pity", hm?
     
  5. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Don't be picky about spelling. It's a forum! :p


    Anyhow, I did like that a lot, something I can fully relate to right now. You touched somone with that. Me...


    Thank you.
     
  6. hippychrome

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    Congrat's too on the publishing :)
    I like the poem, really hits home in ways,
    keep up the good writings :).
     
  7. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    Don't be picky about spelling. It's a forum! :p


    Hey, if it's gonna be published...
     
  8. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    you captured my thoughts and feelings on that one. fucking excellent.
     
  9. WynterFrost

    WynterFrost Short Bus Rider

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    awww you guys are great...and one thing the spelling is fixed by the publishers......
    hehehe didnt you know that?
     
  10. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    It's called an editor. :)
     
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