My newest piece

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by _chris_, Jun 24, 2005.

  1. _chris_

    _chris_ Marxist

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    REVLOUTION O’ CLOCK



    Screw you Mr. Blair

    Fuck you Mr. Bush

    Buddies alike

    War partners alike

    Evil allegiances set in stone



    The proletarians have nothing to loose

    But in the system we have

    Nothing to gain.

    Up with the rich

    Down with the poor

    You’re left rotting in an alley

    Bleeding in a gutter

    Hopes and dreams flow steadily down the drain



    Your heart pumps money not blood

    Symbolizing your hate not your love

    That love that died so many years ago

    It died with your morals, your peace and your soul.

    Left to the maggots and rats

    Feasting upon your vile tasting cast offs

    Those things that would hold you back, make you stop, and say

    “NO!”



    Your tyrannous twisted treaties

    Or your long laborious lies

    Won’t have you saved on judgement day

    At revolution o’ clock

    We’ll seize you

    We’ll have you learn

    Who can push whom around

    And where the real power lies

    The worker control will bring you down

    It will bring you down to your knees

    As the final blow is delivered

    Capitalism shall be crushed forever!

     
  2. Zilah Bey

    Zilah Bey Member

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    You don't sound like a hippie at all. Not that there's anything wrong with that. You're talented, and I hope you love soon: that would be poetry!
     
  3. _chris_

    _chris_ Marxist

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    just because i write revolutionary (democratic btw) poems dont mean i have no love. check this one out for example...






    For every man or woman
    There is hope
    Hope breeds like rabbits
    Acting as the fuel for life
    But!

    For every rabbit there is a wolf
    Every wolf a vengeful demon
    With two goals in life
    To suppress hope
    To gain power

    As wolves hunt
    Rabbits flee
    Each rabbit alone
    Against whole Packs of wolves
    If the rabbits just knew of what they could do
    If they fought as a group
    Instead they dive for their burrows

    Power corrupts
    Corruption is power
    Power that destroys the weak
    Power that fuels the rich
    Power that creates such a hate
    Between brothers and sisters
    Power is strength
    Power is might
    Power standing strong against those who care.

    The packs gather
    Like minds together
    Crazed with their new found glory
    Unaware of corruption within
    No love and no hope

    For whilst there is hope
    Power isn’t all-powerful
    Whilst people care
    There is a chance
    To overthrow
    To overcome
    To learn to love
    To help the rich and the poor
    Together

    Love is the alternative
    Love is that chance
    Fight the hate with your love
    Meet the power with your love
    And as wolves do
    They will tame
    All evil will then crumble
    And the world united will win!
     
  4. lalalamort

    lalalamort Fucked up upstairs

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    i only like poetry when it can be addapted into song.....well all poetry can........so i guess i like all poetry
     
  5. Baby Fire-fly

    Baby Fire-fly Member

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    lol silly lalalamort
     
  6. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    you have a unique rhythm.

    i love it!
     
  7. _chris_

    _chris_ Marxist

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    why thankyou *curtsies*
     
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