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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by mamasoul, Jun 24, 2004.

  1. mamasoul

    mamasoul Member

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    blank dreams and memories
    sitar sings us to sleep
    best friend gone, only his friend left
    sweet stares of a tired baby

    and the wind, and the wind

    guitar plays from the heavens
    leaves turn to sleep
    a baby was born after your last show
    and a young man's just walkin on

    no memories of the four, no memories, no more
     
  2. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    I like "sweet stares of quiet baby" - sometimes the best images are just straightforward descriptions of the way things are
     
  3. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Mmmm...peaceful and a bit nostalgic?

    I liked this whole part very much...

    "blank dreams and memories
    sitar sings us to sleep
    best friend gone, only his friend left
    sweet stares of a tired baby

    and the wind, and the wind"
     

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