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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Jul 15, 2005.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    we kissed under concrete,
    beside aquamarine set,
    glass walls enclosing alive beyond,
    camera capturing ecstatic embrace
    and evident bond.

    we rose, helium based,
    our careless airborne bodies
    cruising lunar caliber,
    exchanging history
    above cloud point
    in flawless orbit.

    and you were so catalyst,
    eyes eclipsed black in midsummer sun,
    perfection an angelic tint
    embossed across your brow,
    and your starlit silhouette
    cast against the sky
    was visible to the naked eye…
    it wasn’t imagination:

    that fission vow’s truth
    and your crooked ruby smile
    could play clustered in the ink,
    so here we are, synched to solar phase,
    on a quilt behind the coffee house
    drinking milky ways.
     
  2. joker

    joker Senior Member

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    This reminds me of a sacred moment with a special girl. I like it.
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    "If the Milky Way were not within me how should I have seen it or known it?"
    Kahlil Gibran, Sand and Foam
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    The old made new...this is why I love reading your stuff. Energizes me. Esp. last stanza is a wowieee. Cheers!
     
  5. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    The celestial breezes of those moments...:)
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    'and you were so catalyst,
    eyes eclipsed black in midsummer sun'

    you are a wonder my friend,
    always a joy to feel your vibes
     
  7. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    jesus yer good
     
  8. Rafaela

    Rafaela Member

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    i loved it. it captured me for that instant/
     
  9. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    expecialy liked that second stanza
     
  10. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    and you were so catalyst,
    eyes eclipsed black in midsummer sun,
    perfection an angelic tint
    embossed across your brow,
    and your starlit silhouette
    cast against the sky
    was visible to the naked eye…
    it wasn’t imagination:

    TY~ Always a huge pleasure to peruse what you have written.
     

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