Emily Cries Too

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Lozi, Jul 13, 2005.

  1. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    At the gate, at the gate
    I watch the boys run,
    their pockets full of virgin toys,
    still with the wrappings on.

    Jovially sunsetting,
    the yellow moon creeps down
    and dries the tears of Emily,
    who wipes her snotty nose on my sleeve.

    Young angel with malta sea eyes,
    I curb the metaphorical pathways with salty blood,
    from my heart that stays silent in the muddy bliss.
    Is this the wakened reality that i must suffer?

    To perch within the clock of time,
    the watch that paused. stuttered. stopped.
    Goodbye my sweet one, can i call you
    Emily? Perhaps we'll meet again, some rainy day...

    Don't know where or when,
    but in the rafe-like windy station,
    trains rush past like tubular mail-
    whisking each soul through a tunnel of foreignity.

    Again, the eyes of Emily play
    strange tricks on me,
    as i discover the lofty platform edge reeks
    heavily of engine oil. sharp and nauseous.

    "gratias for the good times honey"
    I raise a hand in parting,
    wiping a tear from my rusty cheek.
    Her loose scarf waving back.
     
  2. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    I loved the way you ened this poem. :)
     
  3. *electrica*

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    Argh, more greatness.
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Love the 2nd to 5th stanzas. Well done. Depth of thought and stunning imagery abound.
     
  5. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    *bows to each commenter: moonjava, electric and sylvan* thanks guys.
     
  6. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    In such situations it might well be considered: who is really being consoled?
     
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