Etched in graffitti

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by EternalHunter, Jul 24, 2005.

  1. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    I am a metamorphosis
    of dark statue to crumbling dust,
    a battling caterpillar
    threatening imminence
    the constrains of cage
    and cocoon.

    Sweep away tragedy
    like flecks of mica chips
    blossoming quietly,
    sheltering secretly
    in the dew; hiding from
    the seeking sun.

    When all the stones
    sit, glistening, polished,
    by the weather of time
    in a crystal bowl
    there lies the history
    of a pourous memory

    quickly overtaken,
    with perplexion of perception,
    the confusion of marble reflection.
    A liquid that refuses
    to sweat or cry.
    A Promise that refuses to die.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    'Sweep away tragedy
    like flecks of mica chips
    blossoming quietly,
    sheltering secretly
    in the dew; hiding from
    the seeking sun.'

    Brilliant, I'm surprised no-one else has quoted it.
    Regardless, I love the whole poem.
    So many feelings you stir...
     
  3. etherealeyez

    etherealeyez Member

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    "a pourous memory" - marvelous analogy! Love your alliteration as well.
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    your work is always enjoyable to take in. I particularly loved the observations in this one... the entire piece felt well rounded. thx for sharing it :)
     
  5. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    mmmm!

    "a battling caterpillar
    threatening imminence
    the constrains of cage
    and cocoon."
     
  6. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    :) Glad you liked it.
     
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