Thoughts on the Road

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by celestecat, Jul 26, 2005.

  1. celestecat

    celestecat Member

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    You had seemed marked for better things,

    leading a charmed life along the road which,

    for you,

    never seemed bitter or cold.

    The road found you, enticing you

    into adventures.

    The dog-eared

    confidence that held everyone

    captive in its intoxicating wake,

    the enthusiasm that

    never failed to invoke you

    to always take a closer look.

    The journey which took you

    where you needed to go

    hid a more powerful force

    that brought things to you, needing

    you, needing to be in your presence.

    Unchanging in your unassuming ways,

    seeming

    always gently surprised at

    the beauty the world held out for you

    and somehow

    for you,

    the road never seemed bitter or cold.

    Now that you have gone

    the world seems to be a darker place.
    Losing my way over old familiar footsteps


    I try to follow you, knowing there are

    places in the path which I shall

    never be able to go.

    I wish I had your

    courage

    I wish I could see the brilliance

    that was your joy, before the world

    exhausted the wells of beauty that it had once known.

    The road finds me now, taking solace in the

    Only piece of you there is left.

    Walking bitter, cold and alone.

     
  2. NaykidApe

    NaykidApe Bomb the Ban

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    Beautiful
     
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