Last Pages Of An Unread Book.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by blenderhead, Aug 1, 2005.

  1. blenderhead

    blenderhead Member

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    Hi, i just completed a piece of poetry for u's to read. Here it is:
    Last Pages Of An Unread Book.
    Space? Is it there?​
    Stars light the way,​
    In which I walk.​
    Dont sense the rain, nor regret,​
    I should have seen, the Muscle decieves.​
    Nearly finished, time all spent.​
    The clock turns a blind eye,​
    To keep the public's dream.​
    Going, Lasting till the break.​
    Shadow's cast, but not alone,​
    The only place he can stay.​
    Haunting.​
    Too many images, not enough words,​
    to tell the story. It will remain​
    To everyone that's Blind. Ringing ears,​
    From the drum. Plant the seed and let it grow.​
    Naturally.​
    A tree, standing so tall​
    and so sturdy- the axe ​
    soon takes it away.​
    Wiped clean, to a remnant​
    Where it shall remain​
    to it's own decay.​
    Critism is welcome! so gather around and tell me what you think.​
    Thanks for reading,​
    Arron​
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    The weilder of the axe, too, grew from a seed that was planted.
     
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