My Piece of Eden..By-Scarlettrhymes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by scarlettrhymes, Aug 4, 2005.

  1. scarlettrhymes

    scarlettrhymes Member

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    Raindrops fall, like heavens tears
    Submerging all my darkest fears
    Reflections in a moonlit pool
    Sparkles like an uncut jewel

    Colored rocks and swaying trees
    Delighting in an evening breeze
    Azure deep and darkening sky
    It's better than a lullaby

    Everything is clear to see
    When the moon hangs over me
    So in the grass I make my bed
    A tranquil place to lay my head
    The moon and stars my only light
    I hear the music of the night
    In crickets chirp and seagulls whine
    Inside the garden in my mind
     
  2. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    I am fond to rymeing verse, and you do it well
     
  3. realityneversticks

    realityneversticks Member

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    Wow amazing poem. Flows well. Easy to see that this is your place to go to that's all yours were you feel completely at peace. Everyone should have a place like that. Physically or mentally.
     
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