nilaya's mandala

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by TundraLotus, Aug 3, 2005.

  1. TundraLotus

    TundraLotus Member

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    adrift in sands of chicanery
    counting endless grains
    grasping at eidolon

    an everpresent substratum
    invisible in barrens
    always subtle vibrant

    dune ridges slide in time
    leaving no memory
    save for sidewinding undulations

    within this neither place
    reflexive lessons taught
    with each collapse upon themselves

    having insights outside great
    inside solace naught
    a perceptual shimmer lingered

    giving up a chase
    stopping in place
    that had no center or an edge

    aural piping caught on ears
    this source could never cease
    laden deep within the void

    such modulations
    sonic packets of divinity
    cosmic ignis fatuus rises

    Other's floodgates unfold
    placing boundless perceptions
    dynamic gems lacquer'd with EM spectrum

    hydrostatic shockwaves
    governed to ride organic sine forms forever
    a conical intersection

    of spatial spinning energies
    a molecular funnel
    brahmin within this degeneracy point

    annihilating polarities fall apart
    leaving only
    one coin to spin eternally

    divine love standing wave
    brings me to my knees
    embracing infinity

    neuro-spirit tears unleashed
    saturate the desert
    present you mudras of a strong world
     
  2. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    Ever pulsing patterns;
    lonely far away
    hetrodyne so near.
    Spirits undulating
    near resonance;
    Thank You, Thank You.








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  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Indescribably tantric in its lush I'ness,
    delicate craftwomanship wrought with masterly skilled
    calligraphy strokes, deftly you speak with heart and mind joined.

    Fusing the paradox into a sunyata samadhi
    of selfless proportions, yet grounding in the others embrace.
    The other merges with the Self.

    Twin flames speaking of sparks of awareness,
    crystalizing to an intention.

    These intentions to share with peers,
    yet peerless as silent pools,
    give rise to being alone
    with the crickets reflected in both eye and ear.

    Chocolate.
     
  4. EternalHunter

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    This is definetly one of those pieces that praises the written word.
    Your eloquence and appeal to language was inspiring.
     
  5. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    agree with all above... fantastic work, and such incredibly beautiful language of an inspirational nature. thx for sharing this... enjoyed and still enjoying :)
     
  6. ripple23

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    i somewhat disagree with everyone else's response. you have a great vocabulary obviously but you forfeight the intensity of any feeling or emotion by saturating it with waaaaaaay too many words.

    i can't say it's bad writing, but i am personally not drawn to it


    however, i WILL say that i VERY much enjoyed reading sylvan's response.
     
  7. TundraLotus

    TundraLotus Member

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    niyala's mandala,
    much a sphere,
    distilled upon this plane,
    from countless refractions and gaps
    each experientially formed,
    like sunflecks through the tree-top canopy,
    to usher light into the under-story.

    but sometimes, not being as a witness,
    caught in headstrong grasping,
    excited to share with you
    the air i caught in hand.
    thank you for the ripple
    the reflection is quite natural, with
    variation and difference,
    but quite true & accurate from each perspective

    ---
    chocolate? stubborn horse manure? or zen-smack elicits no-mind?
     
  8. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Chocolate, more a matter of sensuality... like water.
     
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