The Promise Of A Lie

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by citrus_seas, Aug 10, 2005.

  1. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    The promise of a lie, the ground in the sky,
    Plummeting so low, but staying so high

    Touching the sun, landing on the moon,
    Staying too late but leaving too soon

    The galaxy without earth, space without stars,
    Living in the world with pollution without cars

    War without peace, fighting without death,
    The world without love, without a single breath

    Politics without corruption, corruption without pain,
    Like living forever in stormy weather without rain

    Drugs without the high, a needle without the skin,
    Morning without that hit that makes you feel as if you can win

    Life without death, death without rebirth,
    Wasting your existence without wondering what life's worth

    Night without day, day without dawn,
    Pen without paper, a singer without a song.
     
  2. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

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    Fuckin a brother, I connect with that like superfly scoring on the detroit thruway.

    "Morning without that hit that makes you feel as if you can win." Just that line right there, hit's me so hard. I can actually feel the withdrawl.

    Yes!!!!

    You have the gift of communicative imagination.
    Somthing "The Man" want's so dearly to remove from all open minds.

    Way fucking cool baby!

    Me like

    Digger
     
  3. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    thanks, man! check out some more of my stuff! I have a song on the same page called "Sweet Mary-Jane" that you might like!
     
  4. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

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    Do you have chords for this citrus?

    I have already imagined a melody line.

    Cool stuff.
     
  5. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    no. but i'd like to have one
     
  6. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

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    Ok,....
    Did you get my e-mail address by the way?

    Digger
     
  7. Moonlight Mile

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    Kickass tune, kept in up.
     

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