Icarus died lucky,(aka) Writers block is a bitch.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Digger168, Aug 10, 2005.

  1. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

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    Unable to fly,.........
    No wind to provide lift.

    Icarus died lucky.

    At least he was able to scoop
    golden apples from the sun.

    Now I seemingly await clearance from the
    blind and mute air traffic controller of the soul.

    With broken wings
    It's hard to sing.
     
  2. citrus_seas

    citrus_seas Senior Member

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    wow. wow. with broken wings it's hard to sing. wow. i can't think right now. my brain is racked with too many philosophicl thoughts
     
  3. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    I like this very much, maybe because I'm familier with
    the mythical flight, yes my name is spelt wrong too,
    internet timing, what can I say, it was all it allowed me
    at the time.
    But can anyone blame Icarus, he wanted to live in his
    youth, maybe only one flight, but it is a good day to die!
    Peace,
    Devon Knight ~ / Icurus
     
  4. Icurus

    Icurus Member

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    And in case any ONE wanted to know what I look like, put
    all one length hair to shoulders on the picture of Jim, and wall-La,
    D ~
     
  5. Digger168

    Digger168 Member

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    I flew today,...

    Touche'
     
  6. EternalHunter

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    I love the simplicity of the words. The stanza breaks are perfect.
     
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