for all who live,within this life....and many more.. shall i peel back myself, reveal all tepid darkness never lightens this soul.[SHOULD IT] with heavy beats,these shoulders. my back arched. lay upon this earth safely ... insupportable is may feel to open the eyes ,the heart following minds..wonder . and so peeling,breathing all, im here within without. the human soul...golden rays upon dawn. this tranquil life...maybe once more..covered selfishly we may crawl not step forward.. until the peeling shall begin.... for open eyes ,with hearts and minds in balance to adjust. ourselves once more..and so i peel ...... lovenpeace to all from saff be whole .be free to know if you really are/ whole...
Oh, these beautiful rays climb into the darkness of my cool sheets. Pools of jet, swirl around touching my feet and calves, creeping as sparkles this liquid gold changes the cold darkness into warm mornings filled with memories of lovers and dreams of breakfast
wow, saffron that was amazing!! thank you for that. and sylvan, i also enjoyed your peice!! i love the last two lines, makes me feel warm and fuzzy.
for all to add.... i gladly rise within rays, not unnerved by myself. once again maybe this,.. the darkness is needed long before , such mornings. golden rays,hidden somewhere shadows dancing peeling. fear not this moment nor the next.. for all and more............ lovenpeace from saff thank you for your replies thank you for reading..
there's been several pieces I've read today that've just got my spirit soaring, and this one's definitely adding to it… your outlook and the way you express it is so uplifting, so full of sense. Thx saff for your wisdom
