Barefoot on the lawn

seeing as you'all are barefoot enthusiasts. I'd like to share a poem I wrote just yeaterday morning at around 6:45 am. In maine afer an early morning shower.

Rain provides the rythym​

Larks provide the song​

i supply the dancing​

In bare feet on the lawn​

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Clouds provide the breezes​

Sun provides the dawn​

i stand tall and witness it all​

In bare feet on the lawn​

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Scarlett rhymes​

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Nice

 

verry nice poetry!! it made my mind and heart dance

 

aww that poem was cute, beautiful, breezy... so many things in one big ball.

I love it

 

I like it, nicely done. You should post it on the Poetry forum if you haven't already.

 

Very nice. Sounds sweet. And so nice to see another person from Maine on these forums!

 

Thanks for all your kindness, I have other poems on the poetry thread
but, I thought I save this one just for U all. I'm in Milo, Maine up near bangor...Howbout u?
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That's a great poem. Share some more with us

 

Aww that's wonderful

 

Nice. I'm probably about as close to Bangor as you, but the other direction away---toward Mt. Desert, and Ellsworth. Really almost the same part of Maine. And fall's starting.

 

yeah !! excelent siss