This is kind of odd... I haven't written much for a while, apart from my dream diary. I guess it's given me a more surreal outlook on things, because i'm always writing down my surreal dreams! But yeah - what do you all think of this? I know it's a bit mental. What messages would you say you can see in it? Blegh, sorry! Love, Sunny xxx What would you say if I carried a gun? Lift up your peace logos, Use this instance to educate. Manipulate? If I plastered mini swastikas On brickwork along Embankment. Would you fire weapons of love Freely, at me? I can’t comprehend what you might Think to do If I carried bloodied greyhound puppies Down to the Thames By their ears. I don’t care all that much, You seem to. But what would you do? And why? You are so taut, so tense. All I feel Is ecstasy.
its like what we were talking about on msn, it makes me feel uncomfortable .. i cringed when i read it. it doesn't sound like you at all, but its a good observation of how society today is... apathetic and as you said looking for as many ways to distance themselves from the truth. the fact that its written so jiltedly, or hmm disconnectedly is preventing you from fully understanding the underlying message - but then thats the point! so its thoroughly successful in doing so. Perhapes however, the poem is so disconnected that it makes it hard to unpick the underlying message?
it makes me think....wow sunny is an awesum writer...i love it truly...parts of it frighten me and part of it makes me think of times where i wana let go and do something a little crazy.... thanks for sharing
It firghtens me, worries me, and also, in a weird way, almost "insults" me. It's like it's an accusation directed at whoever reads it... it makes me feel all... protective all of a sudden. If you put it to the right music, it could be an extremely dark song... in fac it could be absoblutely amazing... excellent writing there though, you certainly have a lot going on up there
