'I'm half sick of shadows,' she said

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  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Suddenly sadness embraces,
    this melancholy absence
    settles like a shroud,
    silencing me as an eclipsing friend
    strikes from the shadows.

    This palpable isolation,
    of reactive cores invisibly
    revealed as blinding radiation,
    not simply a frowning countenance
    more direct like slashing retrogress.

    What can I remove,
    when already a stripped offering
    on the cool lapis block of indifference.
    I lower the pulse
    of this racing heart, to murmur.

    Is this the newness
    you wish to hear echoing
    in the vast canyons of bottomless depth,
    these farewells of effected affection
    colliding like a mirror, splintered.


    ~*
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    You needn't be concerned. She's fine. Be not eager to catch the promises. Fear not the curses. Abide. Endure.
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Weaving beyond the veil,
    she can't help but want to rent
    and step into the swirling dance.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    [What can I remove,
    when already a stripped offering
    on the cool lapis block of indifference.
    I lower the pulse
    of this racing heart, to murmur.]

    Stunning & fresh, hurting too.
     
  5. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    I found this beautiful and intriguing. I love the images and ideas, and your ending is effortless and perfect.
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you both, I'm a loss for additional words at the moment.
     
  7. HerbuhLovuh

    HerbuhLovuh raa

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    yea thanks ;)
     
  8. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    There she weaves by night and day
    A magic web with colors gay.
    She has heard a whisper say,
    A curse is on her if she stay
    To look down to Camelot.
    She knows not what the curse may be,
    And so she weaveth steadily,
    And little other care hath she,
    The Lady of Shalott.

    And moving through a mirror clear
    That hangs before her all the year,
    Shadow of the world appear.
    There she sees the highway near
    Winding down to Camelot…

    But in her web she still delights
    To weave the mirror’s magic sights,
    For often through the silent nights
    A funeral, with plumes and lights
    And music went to Camelot;
    Or when the Mood was overhead,
    Came two young lovers lately wed.
    “I am half sick of Shadows,’ said
    The Lady of Shalott.

    And down the river’s dime expanse
    Like some bold seer in a trance
    Seeing all his own mischance
    With a glassy countenance
    Did she look to Camelot.
    And at the closing of the day
    Shadow loosed the chain, and down she lay;
    The broad stream bore her far away,

    The Lady of Shalott
    ~ Lord Tennyson


     
  10. nesta

    nesta Banned

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    "I am Half Sick of Shadows said the Lady of Shallot"
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  11. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Thank you both for these esteemed art works.
    *bows to the grace of thee*
     
  12. misterrain

    misterrain Banned

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    Summer Hymns did a song called `Half Sick Of Shadows`.
     
  13. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I would love to hear it.


    *
     
  14. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    that was mood altering syl,, excelent
    love that painting nesta posted, i so know that moment of reflection at work, who did that one?
     

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