You are the sole daughter of the rain, washing, with the scarlet morning capturing your thighs, all things that love the light.
i think you need to put all your little poems together in one thread, so they can be rea like one huge poem. cuz as soon as i read one of these, the first word that comes to mind is "and?" i need like a ten minute ripple poem to be sufficiantly satisfied. because they're too good to just get a taste of. i'm hungry now, i need to go...
WHEN i publish a book (notice i did not say IF), i will probably do something to tie those together, like give the book a title, and then not titles for individual poems so that it is more like segments of a whole than just one poem then another... which is what most poets do these days...
you are so random sometimes...makes me wonder what goes on in your head...whatever it is, i'm liking it...good luck w/ that book and all...i would buy it...
I love short poems! Yours put the mental image in my head of a beautiful long-haired woman bathing in a waterfall. A poem doesn't have to be long to be touching. Peace!
haha. well this girl says 'i want to die', she doesn't say it to me exactly, just to the world...whoever would hear. so knowing this i write her a poem because she's pretty. so figuring if she does die at least someone would have written a poem for her and if she doesn't then the poem will cheer her up. the second one happened. and THAT'S the story of that one!
