Dance with me

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SillyGreenMeep, Aug 31, 2005.

  1. SillyGreenMeep

    SillyGreenMeep Member

    Messages:
    222
    Likes Received:
    0
    The sun provides us with life
    As we dance around its eternal flame
    left foot
    right foot
    and back to left again
    And I might not be going anywhere, but at least I'm dizzy now.
    Dizzy enough, perhaps, to forget that the earth is inching closer to crashing
    head on with another year.
    Another year of bridges burning as hot as the star whos warm light we follow..
    so...
    aimlessly...
    It's so bright, we are blinded..
    or maybe our eyes arent enough to see.
    So I'm left feeling around for that something that everyone is searching for
    on my knees now
    closer to the ground but so far from the sky
    that calls out so loud and free
    I could cry.
    But I've tried that before, and it never brings me higher
    It just makes my eyes burn more and more.
    So I collect myself and put the pieces back together
    and I might look cracked now, but at least I have character
    and the mistakes I have made won't be the mistakes I will make
    So I'll spin around with the earth on it's axis
    which brings each day closer
    I might feel different now, but its really all the same, a game
    we play, to make it through the day...
     
  2. o0child_at_nature0o

    o0child_at_nature0o Member

    Messages:
    208
    Likes Received:
    0
    wow this is great.i love how you've got this dance and within it a dance of feelings and wild thoughts. i'll come back to reading this one 4 sure.
     
  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice