my current concern off the top of my head

Above me clouds span the sky
making it difficult for me to see
the beauty that exists from every
angle of every place I'll ever be

Today I am looking down
at the earth beneath my feet
wondering why I feel so lost
wondering why I cannot see
jsut ten steps ahead of me

ahead of me where my brain is running
my body cant keep up
trapped inside this head of mine
i need to turn my vision out
so that I can down on this lag time.

 

you capture the battling soul very well. why can't we see all that is around us, surely the mercal* of life is enough to exsite our souls from morning till night. i think we all are going though this stage of trying to see.i thought this poem refected that.the first verse is a god send. keep it up i love ur poems