sporadic lunacy of genius

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Libertine, Aug 13, 2005.

  1. Libertine

    Libertine Guru of Hedonopia

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    Tell all the people that you see
    It's fun and it's free
    Come down, down, down...and be, just be

    Share your love, share your dream
    Bleed your soul, get high--get free

    Go further and further...
    Take what you find
    Blow my cock
    And I'll blow your mind

    Drop out of the game
    Forget the names, lose the claims,
    control your own brain...

    Without priests and politicians
    Without state or religion
    Without fraternities and sororities
    Think for Yourself And
    Question Authorities
     
  2. monarch

    monarch Member

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    heyyy i like it! haha. very in your face about the subject, i REALLY liked the first two verses, how you started out:

    my favorite part was the 'be, just be,' that really tripped me out =)

    mmm very existential... i like it =)
     
  3. Libertine

    Libertine Guru of Hedonopia

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    Thanks... I am a piecemeal poet, I suppose. Lift an idea from this individual, lift an idea from the first thing that hits my mind. Most everything I write are sporadic ramblings... :)

    Some consider this a good thing, some consider it lack of talent and laziness.
     
  4. Sesen

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    Well that sporadic rambling was fucking awesome so I would say its a good thing :)
     
  5. Libertine

    Libertine Guru of Hedonopia

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    Much appreciation, man!!!

    :)
     
  6. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    poetic stream of tao consciousness untouched by ism,
    unreleased from the form of letters and electricity,
    yet know what you mean making the most love and power
    from the freely given fertile juices of earth, venus and mars...
    oh, a shout out to the moon too... :) peace.
     
  7. Libertine

    Libertine Guru of Hedonopia

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    hippiehillbilly the old asshole

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    honestley,(FUCK SPELLIN), BRAVO...
     
  9. Libertine

    Libertine Guru of Hedonopia

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    Hey bro, I would like to come up and see you guys sometime.
     
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