some of mine

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Court_lew_0216, Aug 1, 2005.

  1. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Passion is beyond the mind :)
     
  2. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    i always look forward to your comments, thank you
     
  3. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    Wondering what you're doing
    at every waking hour
    suddenly fills my heart
    with an emptiness so deep
    I long for anyone or anything
    that even remotely fills the void
    but none of them can measure up
    measure up to you

    How come when we're together
    I never want to part
    I've come to the conclusion
    I'm losing control of my heart








    Still in the process. . . . . I must say it sounds pretty nice with music because before hand i wasnt a fan of it.I actually burnt the original copy but i couldnt get it out of my head so i had to do something with it
     
  4. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    watching while the flames
    are flickering in the twilight
    shadows forming faces
    distortion of our eyesight
    thoughts of you are running
    through my fleeting mind
    memories of pain
    im leaving all behind




    maybe if i get up the courage ill eventually post the actually songs i make out of these last two..... with music i absolutely love them








     
  5. scarlettrhymes

    scarlettrhymes Member

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    Dearest one. It always amazes me the lengths we humans go to recieve the recognition we feel in our bones is out there for us. That ONE other soul that crossed through time beside us and somehow got seperated along the way.

    We,ve done this so many times that we can't help looking for it, Hungering,
    often to the point of complete inner madness.
    Despair not. Even the biggest of heartaches can be blessings in disguise.

    You are doing the right thing. Write it down, get it out, then the healing can start. Love is a gift not always recieved in the condition we send it in.
    We can't provoke a response in someone that isn't in them to give freely at this time. Sometimes you have to love them {and yourself } enough to walk away.
    Torture your self no more. There are many that take this journey with us.
    Some were our brothers, sisters, lovers fathers,. We all came in love.
    When you give yourself the love and respect you deserve...They will find you.
    Much peace and love to you all. Scarlett

     
  6. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    How true is that......... *sigh*
     
  7. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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  8. SLammon420

    SLammon420 Senior Member

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    i really dig that line...i bet it would be a great song.
     
  9. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    I like your ability to derive these concepts... If these are your own personal expireinces, they are close to my very own... Theres so much out there, the pain the misery the sorrow, all let us know we are alive... And i love that one

    "How come when we're together
    I never want to part
    I've come to the conclusion
    I'm losing control of my heart
    "

    The words here are said to me in the voice of the one i truly love, and had to part... theres always something beyond the pain, that gut feeling that nothing is right.. Losing control is gooooooooooooooooddddd
     
  10. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    i might have a publisher after me....... which do you like most to put in a book/collection??? id appreciate your input
     
  11. steffan

    steffan puffin

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    thats very good
     
  12. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    thanx for your input
     
  13. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    come on guys........ i need your help
     
  14. Widowed Diva

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    I must say your poems really express what your feeling. You seem like a creative writer. Keep it up!!:)
     
  15. Widowed Diva

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    I must say your poems really express what your feeling. You seem like a creative writer. Keep it up!!
     
  16. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    thank you i appreciate it...... any you liked in particular??
     
  17. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    Bound
    by the binds
    of everlasting
    hatred

    we look upon
    each other
    with anger
    and disgust

    only to find
    that we,
    as many do,
    repressed our love

    to wallow ​
    in self pity ​
    and never learn​
    to trust​
     
  18. Court_lew_0216

    Court_lew_0216 True Aquarius

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    Forget about today
    it was an illusion​
    a delusional mindset​
    triggered by a desire,​
    a yearning to be free​
    once more. . .​
    of the shackles ​
    that bind you...​
    of the streetlamps​
    that blind you...​
    so next time ​
    if fate insists​
    you can permit yourself​
    to do it again​
    just to get through....​
    hunny,this is life​

     
  19. saffronfrancisburnet

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    hi there

    this is a lovely peom
    so full of life and needing to be alive...

    keep writing from your heart it shines
    in your words of learning to live....

    lovenpeace from saff
     
  20. mrsmorrison27

    mrsmorrison27 yoda piss

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    i really like this it means a whole LOTta something to me. i like poets who write thingsi can relate to, so i dont ust read mine, but others knwo how i feel as well, its awsome, but neways i like this alot:All the words I wish your fingers could feel



    All the times I’ve wished


    You could know


    The silent sorrow


    Lying stiff in my throat


    Like cold


    And broken teeth
     

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