Wondering what you're doing at every waking hour suddenly fills my heart with an emptiness so deep I long for anyone or anything that even remotely fills the void but none of them can measure up measure up to you How come when we're together I never want to part I've come to the conclusion I'm losing control of my heart Still in the process. . . . . I must say it sounds pretty nice with music because before hand i wasnt a fan of it.I actually burnt the original copy but i couldnt get it out of my head so i had to do something with it
watching while the flames are flickering in the twilight shadows forming faces distortion of our eyesight thoughts of you are running through my fleeting mind memories of pain im leaving all behind maybe if i get up the courage ill eventually post the actually songs i make out of these last two..... with music i absolutely love them
Dearest one. It always amazes me the lengths we humans go to recieve the recognition we feel in our bones is out there for us. That ONE other soul that crossed through time beside us and somehow got seperated along the way. We,ve done this so many times that we can't help looking for it, Hungering, often to the point of complete inner madness. Despair not. Even the biggest of heartaches can be blessings in disguise. You are doing the right thing. Write it down, get it out, then the healing can start. Love is a gift not always recieved in the condition we send it in. We can't provoke a response in someone that isn't in them to give freely at this time. Sometimes you have to love them {and yourself } enough to walk away. Torture your self no more. There are many that take this journey with us. Some were our brothers, sisters, lovers fathers,. We all came in love. When you give yourself the love and respect you deserve...They will find you. Much peace and love to you all. Scarlett
I like your ability to derive these concepts... If these are your own personal expireinces, they are close to my very own... Theres so much out there, the pain the misery the sorrow, all let us know we are alive... And i love that one "How come when we're together I never want to part I've come to the conclusion I'm losing control of my heart " The words here are said to me in the voice of the one i truly love, and had to part... theres always something beyond the pain, that gut feeling that nothing is right.. Losing control is gooooooooooooooooddddd
i might have a publisher after me....... which do you like most to put in a book/collection??? id appreciate your input
I must say your poems really express what your feeling. You seem like a creative writer. Keep it up!!
I must say your poems really express what your feeling. You seem like a creative writer. Keep it up!!
Bound by the binds of everlasting hatred we look upon each other with anger and disgust only to find that we, as many do, repressed our love to wallow in self pity and never learnto trust
Forget about today it was an illusiona delusional mindsettriggered by a desire,a yearning to be freeonce more. . .of the shackles that bind you...of the streetlamps that blind you...so next time if fate insistsyou can permit yourselfto do it againjust to get through.... hunny,this is life
hi there this is a lovely peom so full of life and needing to be alive... keep writing from your heart it shines in your words of learning to live.... lovenpeace from saff
i really like this it means a whole LOTta something to me. i like poets who write thingsi can relate to, so i dont ust read mine, but others knwo how i feel as well, its awsome, but neways i like this alot:All the words I wish your fingers could feel All the times I’ve wished You could know The silent sorrow Lying stiff in my throat Like cold And broken teeth