some of mine

Passion is beyond the mind

 

i always look forward to your comments, thank you

 

Wondering what you're doing
at every waking hour
suddenly fills my heart
with an emptiness so deep
I long for anyone or anything
that even remotely fills the void
but none of them can measure up
measure up to you

How come when we're together
I never want to part
I've come to the conclusion
I'm losing control of my heart








Still in the process. . . . . I must say it sounds pretty nice with music because before hand i wasnt a fan of it.I actually burnt the original copy but i couldnt get it out of my head so i had to do something with it

 

watching while the flames
are flickering in the twilight
shadows forming faces
distortion of our eyesight
thoughts of you are running
through my fleeting mind
memories of pain
im leaving all behind



maybe if i get up the courage ill eventually post the actually songs i make out of these last two..... with music i absolutely love them








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Dearest one. It always amazes me the lengths we humans go to recieve the recognition we feel in our bones is out there for us. That ONE other soul that crossed through time beside us and somehow got seperated along the way.

We,ve done this so many times that we can't help looking for it, Hungering,
often to the point of complete inner madness.
Despair not. Even the biggest of heartaches can be blessings in disguise.

You are doing the right thing. Write it down, get it out, then the healing can start. Love is a gift not always recieved in the condition we send it in.
We can't provoke a response in someone that isn't in them to give freely at this time. Sometimes you have to love them {and yourself } enough to walk away.
Torture your self no more. There are many that take this journey with us.
Some were our brothers, sisters, lovers fathers,. We all came in love.
When you give yourself the love and respect you deserve...They will find you.

Much peace and love to you all. Scarlett

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How true is that......... *sigh*

 

bumpin it

 

i really dig that line...i bet it would be a great song.

 

I like your ability to derive these concepts... If these are your own personal expireinces, they are close to my very own... Theres so much out there, the pain the misery the sorrow, all let us know we are alive... And i love that one

"How come when we're together
I never want to part
I've come to the conclusion
I'm losing control of my heart
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The words here are said to me in the voice of the one i truly love, and had to part... theres always something beyond the pain, that gut feeling that nothing is right.. Losing control is gooooooooooooooooddddd

 

i might have a publisher after me....... which do you like most to put in a book/collection??? id appreciate your input

 

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thats very good

 

thanx for your input

 

come on guys........ i need your help

 

I must say your poems really express what your feeling. You seem like a creative writer. Keep it up!!

 

I must say your poems really express what your feeling. You seem like a creative writer. Keep it up!!

 

thank you i appreciate it...... any you liked in particular??

 

Bound
by the binds
of everlasting
hatred

we look upon
each other
with anger
and disgust

only to find
that we,
as many do,
repressed our love

to wallow ​

in self pity ​

and never learn​

to trust​

 

Forget about today
​

it was an illusion​

a delusional mindset​

triggered by a desire,​

a yearning to be free​

once more. . .​

of the shackles ​

that bind you...​

of the streetlamps​

that blind you...​

so next time ​

if fate insists​

you can permit yourself​

to do it again​

just to get through....​

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hunny,this is life​

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hi there

this is a lovely peom
so full of life and needing to be alive...

keep writing from your heart it shines
in your words of learning to live....

lovenpeace from saff

 

i really like this it means a whole LOTta something to me. i like poets who write thingsi can relate to, so i dont ust read mine, but others knwo how i feel as well, its awsome, but neways i like this alot:All the words I wish your fingers could feel



All the times I’ve wished


You could know


The silent sorrow


Lying stiff in my throat


Like cold


And broken teeth