Sometimes worlds die

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by celeritea, Sep 11, 2005.

  1. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    Its your hate thats mine
    living inside time like a parasite
    however we run away the band snaps
    the shudders clap in the frozen breeze of a million brains
    sending tidal waves of energy across the plains
    as we stew behind the wheel
    of ships speeding across an even keel
    crying torture at the sun
    never losing the sense of fun in destruction
    the man upstairs shares our love
    and the one below we share hate with
    both can be considered a gift
    but the other creatures here pay for the latter
    americans and pigs eat the things that grow fatter
    and the skinny ones die ignored, the healthy trees make us bored
    with their oxygen
    keeping us alive
    never giving us a way off the island
    look to captain George
    hes always been the head lemming
    ever since there was a jumping gorge


    written 9-11-01
     
  2. TreeFiddy

    TreeFiddy Member

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    wow, very interesting. by the fourth line i was completely gripped
     
  3. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

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    I didn't like it too much
    didn't flow too well to me
    I think if you worked on the wording it could be great, but the way it is now I do not like


    and what did Bush do wrong on 9/11?
     
  4. Random Andy

    Random Andy Member

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    The title... is amazingly poignant to me:(
     
  5. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    sO, duck....
    i really really dont want to get into a discusssion about this, because the lines about bush are not exactly about him, or anyone else...its a complex thing i wrote that day, it felt like i didnt write it...

    but i believe that the bush administration caused the world trade center attack, and murdered those people. Lets not talk about it here, if you disagree, just PM me, thanks :)
     
  6. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    its freakily cosmic and powerful... i fkin loved it!
     
  7. SoFarAway

    SoFarAway Friendly Fried Guy

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    Sat in a classroom for 7 minutes instead of taking action.. ?
     
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