to hippievixen although I dont know you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by celeritea, Sep 9, 2005.

  1. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    "Pet Duke"
    itchingscratches
    to scratch an itch
    mocked by things parasitic
    attached to a bag of salty wine and rock
    glued to a ticking clock
    sailing the crust to a rift on a raft
    Joy is sorrow unmasked

    wisdom is a sour cherry
    chewed by a jester
    on his way to a cemetary

    ' cause..
    the rain paid our grub to grow
    and the wind paid the rain to snow
    and i dont know
    or else id change the snow to rain
    praying never changed anything
    except for spring
    ..an effect

    of turning grey array from blue and red
    no one will miss me when im dead
    in everyone is a faithful dog
    searching for a bowl in the mysterious fog
    Patriotism is a double edged sword
    Beware Caeser beating the drums of war
    paddling fast our sinking rafts against the draft
    painting a sacred scared sensation, modern mans tired bones only express temptation
    the only difference in colors expressed by identical twin brothers
    both go grey before going to the fray by wayof a hawk that knows the river styx like blue knows the shock of never getting its fix
    always resting in my eyes, a haze of cumbersome tries to catch up to an impulse, the rose of no thorn will be worn by the grateful dead

    the scars on your head show how much weve tried to lie
    every song needs bass in the space of grass induced grace
    Rising waves, we are washed on the shores of tommorrow
     
  2. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    ooooh she's so lucky
     
  3. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    Celeritea Sees Itself ?
     
  4. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    I dont understand or oversit
     
  5. natural23

    natural23 Senior Member

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    An awareness of the self, of the informational content of the person including what is commonly referred to as "the personality", such that this awareness has significance in terms of nature of the self. Now we could take this into reductio ad absurdum but what I am saying in simpler terms is that it appears to me that your poetry is also a detailed rendering about you, about the nature of your focus. I should clarify that I am not defining whether "Sees Itself" refers to, in whole or in part, an awareness that is a conscious awareness.




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  6. celeritea

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    I appreciate your wisdom, E Philo Soph. The nature of my focus is telescoped into a microscopic paradigm, which just happens to be the size of our entire universe. Epistemology is a spilled glass of wine, and personalities are fleeting.

    I am a deterministic person, and you are correct that the poem is an observation. Like a dying brazil tree notices the vines choking its life force, all I can do is observe the descension of our society. It is not the fault of a man, such as me or George W Bush, or even of a giant organization of men, such as the secret 7. OR even Aliens! This descension is a chess game that our lifetime is one move within. Each line in the poem reflects free will on its own mirror image, saying forget about the choices, because it is an illusion. Basically, it is emploring mankind to enjoy its life in what small doses he is allowed to enjoy. Change is a security blanket, in summation.


    I appreciate your interest, there are many more if you'd like them.
    matt
     
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    True true I wish a girl can write me a poem.
     
  8. celeritea

    celeritea Member

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    what about a boy?
     
  9. ImmortalDissident

    ImmortalDissident Senior Member

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    Hey, where is my poem?


    I forgot, do you play guitar? If so I'd love to hear some of your amazing words put to music.
     
  10. natural23

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    Matt,

    Telescopic view implies that there is much more to see; and thus the "microscopic paradigm," no matter its size, appears, in part, as you have analogized; small. And given the metaphors utilized and my awareness of accurate awareness, in this case, considering size and or content, it is not the "entire universe." We emanate from what we are, and thought, be it in philosophy or other fields, provides the "opportunity" to hide or to seek and find. I have found that self honesty provides profound reward; honest self review through the vehicle of acknowledgement of the reality of participation in life.

    Not tangling, yet, with the detached folly of rationalization that mankind is in the 'grips' descension or entropic decay that cannot be averted, I will say, "we are a participants." Don't just observe a mugging, find compassion and courage. There will be those who are misguided, some with great material power, in the human scene but in the likeness of good find the courage to stand with goodness.

    I propose that what appears to be descension may, actually, be disintegration of old collective paradigms in the process of new collective paradigms being formed. The ideals that, in a just and good manner, promote and enhance collective and individual human freedom are of profound importance; so that we, our children and our 'childrens children' can choose to be more of what we are capable of. The robotic lacks true creativity; and the indivdual impulse to create, to be the individuals that we are, will win, overall, through the advancing cycles that often appear as descension.

    Peace and good for all of us,

    David


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  11. celeritea

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    yes, I play lots of things:) i just play
    i am sorry i havent contacted you, I was looking forward to meeting! but with this new orleans thing we've been so busy over here sending out food...
    we're picking basically the entire farm and shipping it to mississippi (missing hippy)

    i would love to sing for you sometime soon though we'll go to some mellow beach and wander :)


    David:
    You are an intelligent and inspiring person, certainly...I wrote a new poem out of your last post, am trying to make a song out of it in C Minor (sad chords for happy lyrics, always-:) So this is for you, maybe youll see it by some random form of media one day as a song

    Entropy is still light
    your time left
    is always right
    some hearts beat faster than others
    they only seek to find:
    decay is a festive occasion
    goodness is a timely evasion
    standing in the light

    tangling tricks around a spool of words
    allowing fools to detach themselves
    making sense of a ration of time
    smiling, we spring from what we are
    still light outside by far
     
  12. ImmortalDissident

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    Yeah, we'll definitely have to get together before the weather turns, but I completely understand the work that needs to be done on the farm.


    Tomorrow I'm going to World Shelters in Arcata to help assemble parts of shelters to be shipped to the southeast.
     
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