this stuff is things i wrote a really long time ago and just found today a quote, not very good but i like it anyways: "everything is twisted and spinning in circles...will it ever stop? mind racing, heart pounding head hurts fucking stop!" Speaking but the words arent heard they're only heard by me Walk up to a group of people try to get someones attention but go unseen i see them they dont seem to see me Stating my opinion but my words go unnoticed is it to loud for anyone to hear me or do i have no voice? trying to explain but nobody understands- am i speaking jiberish? i no longer care im dieing inside but nobody will ever know *The blood runs down her arm like water, she gives a smile her last, knowing she has finally succeeded, she drops to the ground for a sleep she will never wake from, she will be found soon, among a puddle of blood and many empty pain medication bottles for she was forever trying to relieve her pain... -she finally succeeded with the sleep she will never wake from-for she has meet death
i like they are pretty blunt and straight-forward... but your style is new and i like it. I prefer the first poem to the second. Kinda gave me one of those half smiles at the end.. you know the kind? haha keep it up(Y)
id like to tell you.. how much you really mean to me even if i didint show it that no matter what i love you always that if you ever need anything im there for you no matter what im sorry for mistakes i made and glad you gave me another chance that im sorry if i ever hurt you i really didint mean it thanks for always being there for me when i needed you and thanks for being understanding and kind and thanks again for trying to help me and giving me advice even though i didint think i needed it
