obsessed

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by octofryed, Jul 5, 2004.

  1. octofryed

    octofryed Member

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    obsessed


    alone
    uninspired
    can't sleep
    dead tired
    words
    no longer
    i'm weak
    you're stronger
    hope
    where'd it go
    down and out
    feelin low
    fate
    just my luck
    she's gone
    now i'm fucked
    shave my head
    slit my wrists
    things to do
    on a list
    take a hike
    off a cliff
    pour a drink
    make it stiff
    try to give
    her some space
    wish i could vanish
    without a trace
    i'm fucking crazy
    fucking obsessed
    full of regret
    heads a mess
    need her touch
    need her skin
    need it too much
    need it like sin
    trouble thinking
    i'm just a freak
    ship of emotions
    has sprung a leak
    now i am drowning
    now i can't breathe
    sink or swim
    why'd she leave
     
  2. guardian_tnaos

    guardian_tnaos Member

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    it was great. i love your work.
     
  3. Musikero

    Musikero Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Yeah, me too! The tone of this one is very....I don't know. It's like listening to someone muttering in his sleep, y'know? Like I'm listening to someone having a nightmare and talking in his/her sleep.
     

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