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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by guardian_tnaos, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. guardian_tnaos

    guardian_tnaos Member

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    i'm not too sure about the grammar, and it seems unfinished, but here goes

    deep brown eyes
    dark tan skin
    the one i lived for
    the one for whom i sinned
    gentle touch
    that is not meant for me
    broken truth
    that only i can see
    my inspiration and muse
    the one i died for
    the one for whom i am used.
     
  2. squawkers7

    squawkers7 radical rebel

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    I keep my paintbrush with me, where ever I may go,
    in case I need to cover up, so the REAL me don't show.
    I'm so afraid to show you me, afraid of what you'll do.
    you might laugh or say mean things, I'm afraid I may lose you.
    I'd like to remove all my paintcoats, to show the real me.
    But I want you to try & understand, I want you to like what you see.
    So, if you'll be patient & close your eyes I'll strip off my coats real slow;
    please understand how much it hurts, to let the real me show.
    Now all the coats are off.
    I feel naked, bare and cold
    If you still love me, and all that you see
    you are my friend....pure as gold.
    But I need to save my paintbrush and hold it in my hand
    I want to keep it handy in case somebody doesn't understand
    So please protect me, my dear friend and thanks for loving me true;
    but please let me keep my paintbrush with me until I love me too!
     

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