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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by guardian_tnaos, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. guardian_tnaos

    guardian_tnaos Member

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    my head is spinning
    and my feet cant find the ground
    my heart is sinking
    and my soul can not be found
    i believed in your words
    and your lies that stabbed me
    not with daggers, but with swords
    im aching all over
    but my pain can not be seen
    my blood is almost drained
    by that brilliant silver sting
     
  2. strawpuppy

    strawpuppy Member

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    was it a scorpio star sign wot dunnit ?
     
  3. guardian_tnaos

    guardian_tnaos Member

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    um, i don't think i understand your question.
     
  4. strawpuppy

    strawpuppy Member

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    it was the bit that said


    "that brilliant silver sting"


    sounds like someone jilted you....and scorpions have a nasty sting...

    was just wondering...
     
  5. octofryed

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    good job... short, sweet and definitely to the point.
     
  6. guardian_tnaos

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    the brillian silver sting is a blade. bc when i used to cut myself, i remember it used to kind of sting.
     

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