tell me what you guys think. it's somewhat rare for me to rhyme in my poetry A diamond, shattered across the black, Shared its silent beauty with the night And with an old white wolf Who bathed in the diamond’s light. The old wolf’s paw held many lives Of many victims and foes defeated, And his heart was very heavy With the guilt of sins repeated. His mind burned with unwelcome rage. His heart cried out in pain. His eyes shed tears of blood For all the innocents slain. The constant reminders haunted him. The bloodstained paw and heavy heart. He sunk into the shadows And wandered alone in the dark. "Brothers and sisters fallen," He whispered into shadow, "Please forgive this old wolf, And soon I will follow." "Soon my pain will end So that others may forget theirs. Let a new life replace mine, Led by someone who cares." "A young and kind pup. I wouldn’t mind this end. An old killer will die. A new life will begin." The shattered diamond faded. The sky became gray Before flooding with light. A brand new day.