I am the voyeur of the witnessing the way your fingertips glide over glistening skin in nervous glances my way and unconscious body language I know love does not come easy to a small town boy like you and this tension of being so close to what your body needs is making me delirious with a longing equal to yours oh the slow vibrational drag as magnetism makes rational thought a task I am wandering like your fingers over that able body landscape and salty droplets of summer haze I know love does not come easy to a small town boy like you and I am watching this opportunity building in tensile sensuality we may not make aching contact today but there are tomorrows in waiting ©2003 DC Vision
The ending was a bit of a let down....too abrupt for me, doesn't feel like a proper closure. Also the lack of any punctuation brings things down too. Over all good imagery, not the most fascinating but keeps the interest going. "©2003 DC Vision " Darn, so that means I can't print this and sell it to my friends?
