burner sol

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Oct 26, 2005.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Our fusion edge in platinum oaths
    kept lactic legs kinetic— right left
    while we leapt across plasma spread
    under burner sol, clear auras enclosed.

    Only a couple kilometers, now.
    Up ahead, home.
    Lead goes gold, anticipating
    a brass poster bed’s
    frisk demand,
    a cigarette smoke tornado
    trails to the ceiling fan

    cos we’ve found pageantry
    in an orchards blush,
    the queen of cups
    clutches the static mystery.

    It's such a social affair.
    Everywhere fell sky-shell flare
    as a brisk-breath baby
    coiled and sprung
    to the number one
    so far, so far.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Delectable, last stanza was my favorite. I need to get back into the groove, this reminded me how I miss my clever turns of the tongue...I want it back! There are some really awesome, unique phrases in this, inspiring.
     
  3. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Reminds me of pelicans. Cheers to the brisk-breath baby!
     
  4. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Change on...

    I found this bright and energetic...
    a rebirthing sequence of purification
    and swirling newness.
     
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