I journeyed across the world today drank a cup in the pouring rain it cleansed my soul and made me new out of a dream then i came to you oh the tales I've told and the truths I've seen wonder how they could have ever been woke up today from this dream of life filled with pain, joy, love, and strife walked out alone, my moonlit mind how was i to know what i'd find and then the colors, oh the colors oh the colors, better than all the others and in a woosh, the groove and flow the earth is alive and i can feel her soul trees dance and sing in silence imprisoned in the ground paying penance for ancient crimes they didn't commit but still singing praises, the beauty of it then slowly the singing and dancing and clapping and spinning and turning and snapping it all heads to a halt as reality's feeling fades soon to be replaced with human logical haze having seen the world for all that it is how could we not forever cherish this what will we do when the singing fades? what will we do if it all decays? Well there it is, a bunch of psychobabble that showed up on my page one night, think it turned out alright, though i do feel like its missing something
'and in a woosh, the groove and flow'...wowser that bit is great! the rest of it is too of course, that bit just caught my eye particularly. great words LordHelmet!
And you just be what you gotta be, and see what you gotta see, la dee da duh da dee, and just follow your destiny
I enjoyed reading this. Really interesting. I always like stream of consciousness writing. This is my favorite part. Love human logical haze. I feel like this is a statement on ecology. Saying we must cherish it. Good message. Thanks for sharing.
i think that was great. Made me think about the true beauty of the earth. i write as well..check out my poems.. *you're very talented!!!* keep on writing peace and love. -Cara-
