just a little poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MalyEdus, Jul 10, 2004.

  1. MalyEdus

    MalyEdus Member

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    you're the one i wanna kiss
    you're the sun that i miss
    every time i'm not with you
    ...i am glad of having you

    I've never been good at it,this is my first one...
     
    MalyEdus, Jul 10, 2004
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  3. fizzy_elf

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    awwww its cute, i love little poems :)
     
    fizzy_elf, Jul 10, 2004
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  5. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

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    thats a nice poem. short & sweet. keep it up. i write some poetry too
     
    kjhippielove88, Jul 10, 2004
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  7. MalyEdus

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    Oh thanks!I’m glad you like it!



    Love Edith
     
    MalyEdus, Jul 14, 2004
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