buzzed on another

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dc-vision, Jul 10, 2004.

  1. dc-vision

    dc-vision Member

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    I am
    your witness
    at your peripheral
    vision
    I am
    buzzed on you
    absorbed with you

    intimate
    without the walls
    silent
    watching the dance
    of your being

    this is love to me
    this is ecstasy
    being buzzed on you
    in an eternal moment
    of witnessing

    the delicacy
    of your movements
    the in breath
    the furrowed brow
    the hair fall
    the inward lean

    absorbed in you
    absorbed in whatever
    you are doing
    whether it be writing
    or daydreaming
    I am buzzed on you
    until the spell is broken

    when you feel me
    feeling you
    and turn
    to look at me
    and ask
    "what?"


    ©2003 DC Vision

     
  2. sweetdreadlover

    sweetdreadlover TattooedRainbowGurl

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    the only problem with it in my eyes are the words are slightly muddled...what you are trying to say is absolutely beautiful...but try making sure the words make 100% sense if you want it to be understood :)
     

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