masquerade

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Oct 31, 2005.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    Peak time in calendar exam
    with costume swank underway,
    action plan to crater
    a clever masquerade.
    A matchmaker's cloud nine,
    painted, in roll tide
    to swing beats tag lined
    with clever art.

    Her sharp hair orange,
    barbed hard, up.
    I fall, I fall.
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Quite clever and evocative, sharp imagery... nice.
     
  3. skyfire

    skyfire Member

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    exactly.....wow.
     
  4. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    This is haloween this is haloween.....hehe
     
  5. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    thanks for the replies everyone, wish I'd made it longer, but needed a surreal edge, imo (margarita blur... mmmm)

    yeah, more specifically the party I went to, in a crater, on saturday night with some good swing jams, and falling for a dinosaur, lol
     
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