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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pandora_jade, Nov 3, 2005.

  1. pandora_jade

    pandora_jade Member

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    all those pretty lies
    the ones that sound so good
    you have to smile
    even though you know it's over
    no matter how hard you try
    together and separate
    the moment is lost
    gone forever
    touching the next lucky soul
    and it was so great
    so explicitely wonderful
    you'll search heaven and hell
    just to know it's embrace
    for one more heartache
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Phoenix-heart beating
    in a flurry of emotional intensity,
    rising to embrace
    with streams of fire, anew.

    Taking flight within
    as helix lovers chase
    to part in self-definition...
    falling shards of loves' reflection.

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    Thank you, for this.
     
  3. cara27

    cara27 Member

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    ah my dear..the workings of your mind are truely a masterpiece. love it. xoxo
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    excellent perception this one has... makes me think beyond the words already there and put my own scenario behind it, which is cool... another great one from you, enjoying your work!
     

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