Community Poem/story(whatever Happens)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by MushieBaby, Nov 5, 2005.

  1. MushieBaby

    MushieBaby Member

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    I saw something like this posted a while ago i think.. lets write a poem/story together. you know one person rights something and someone else adds something to that, and no it doesnt have to make total sense. i just wanna see where it will go... hence the purpose right? I'll start...
    From the pits of
     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    from the pits of anger and rage
    he came like a bat out of hell
     
  3. MushieBaby

    MushieBaby Member

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    from teh pits of anger and rage
    he came like a bat out of hell

    but not just any bat
    a blue bat, riding the blue bus
     
  4. verseau_miracle

    verseau_miracle Banned

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    Screeching and scorching,
    Stumbling
    Thinking...
     
  5. AshtonsMom

    AshtonsMom Banned

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    oh my god...i forgot to cut off the coffeepot!!!!
     
  6. MushieBaby

    MushieBaby Member

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    from teh pits of anger and rage
    he came like a bat out of hell

    but not just any bat
    a blue bat, riding the blue bus
    Screeching and scorching,
    Stumbling
    Thinking...
    oh my god...i forgot to cut off the coffeepot!!!!

    then he said,
    "damn i think i have lint on my lip"
     
  7. tigerlily

    tigerlily proud mama

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    from teh pits of anger and rage
    he came like a bat out of hell

    but not just any bat
    a blue bat, riding the blue bus
    Screeching and scorching,
    Stumbling
    Thinking...
    oh my god...i forgot to cut off the coffeepot!!!!

    then he said,
    "damn i think i have lint on my lip"

    shrugging oh well, he turned around
    and attempted another dramatic exit
     
  8. verseau_miracle

    verseau_miracle Banned

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    Yet failed this time
    For rehearsals and reversals were all just the same
    (With death ending every one)
    God damn the mocking sun that shone,
    Smirking-lets end this-fetch the gun...
     

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