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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Keep_Smiling, Nov 7, 2005.

  1. Keep_Smiling

    Keep_Smiling Member

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    Noob. First post. Hope you enjoy. Peace.

    A homeless heart still rings
    Like a bent string
    Or God
    In some strangers hand
    Only parking for the
    Meanwhile I choke on broken spokes
    Blowing through and rattling disease
    In the city streets
     
  2. tigerlily

    tigerlily proud mama

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    scary..
     
  3. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    i think it sounds exhilerating
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    love the broken flow, works well; and has a nice kinda haunted vibe to it... good stuff!
     

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