now and waiting

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by pandora_jade, Nov 10, 2005.

  1. pandora_jade

    pandora_jade Member

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    the predescending dawn
    so epic in its confinement
    darkenss my comfort blanket
    to cover the sins of my soul
    all my words edged with bitterness
    happiness shadowed by doubt
    watching with my eyes closed
    feeling with a heavy heart
    the deepness of you
    my twin soul, kindred spirit
    so strong but torn down
    not yet broken but eclipsed in the downward spiral
    reminded each day of a painful past
    guided into a bitter refuge
    being shown the future but having no patience to wait
    so ironic in its complexity
    that above is laughing in amusement
    the struggles of mankind
    of my own
     
  2. sitareric

    sitareric Banned

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    Struggles are rough.... The poem i think is good
     

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