Hiking the mountain ridge the rocky trail biting my bare feet the sun, the breeze, the view the long hard trek that took me away and brought me home at last she said I looked like a hangover I said I felt like a summer sunset
Nice, I like the hangover/sunset lines, so true. Both right and yet noth so different. Reminds me of a card I wrote to put with flowers: "I'd climb a mountain just to see the view, made ever-more beautiful by been there with you"
The mountain always brings a serene Idea, I liked the simple images. I work the same way, bring the reader to your work the places that you truly see. Well done.
