Day flees in the twilight, over hillsides ridden with roman suicides far to proud to live on. Edit: Cheers TrippinBTM for knoticing!
Simply beautiful...sometimes the fewer words the moe profound. Like a simple I love you, or thank you, or twilight
thats a clever idea. its like saying that sunset was so magnificent it kills itself so that it wont stay to be....i dont know taken for granted!!
spelling threw me off, i was thinking, what to fleas have to do with this? haha. Anyways, once my brain kicked into gear, it made sense and the beauty shone through. I like the simplicity which holds so much meaning. Nicely done.