Lost In Your Eyes

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by AshtonsMom, Nov 25, 2005.

  1. AshtonsMom

    AshtonsMom Banned

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    I wrote this for a really good friend of mine...I love him with everything in my soul, though I suspect he doesn't know...





    I got lost in your eyes,
    and I'm not sure I can ever
    be found again.

    I began to melt when you smiled,
    and I fear that there's
    no turning back.

    One look from you,
    and I get shaky in the knees.
    You make me weak.
    But I like it.
    I like feeling like I have
    no control over myself when I see you.
    And what I would give
    to feel your touch.
    I imagine that with one
    caress of your hands
    I would be consumed with passion
    and stay that way forever.
    You make me burn with need,
    so powerful and so strong that I believe
    that if fire were ever set to my skin,
    it would be cool compared to the
    heat that you would generate.
    And if that moment ever comes,
    I fear I would be lost in your eyes
    forever,
    because I wouldn't want to be found.



    © Heather Bush
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    This is beatiful heather, thankyou for posting it:)
     
  3. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

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    I've felt that way before. great poem!! I especially love the comparison to fire. *bravo*
     
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