Dieing to tell you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by May Aizelle, Nov 25, 2005.

  1. May Aizelle

    May Aizelle Member

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    I have this problem
    Im dieing to tell you
    But you tell him
    And he'll start yelling
    Im so scared
    Dont know where to turn
    I have this problem
    Im dieing to tell you

    Your anger
    It kills me inside and out
    I hear you yell and scream
    Im dieing without a doubt
    Can you hear my silent screams?
    I have this problem
    Im DIEING to tell you

    Really random... but I was just stressed and this is what came out....
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    Ouch. i can sense anger and sadness maybe? + frustration too? emotional write.
     
  3. Corvuspirit

    Corvuspirit Member

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    that is what poetry is all about - empty the cup, and sometimes it fills with answers
     
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