love poem to any and all

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by floyd4peace, Nov 27, 2005.

  1. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    nothing used to matter
    i dont think
    i dont remember
    until
    walked into my life
    a person like no other
    to develop emotions
    or incomplete thoughts
    and bring out beauty
    no one's noticed yet
    people have effect
    on one another
    no memories disappear
    gone forever
    people can be invincible
    they can be immortal
    all we need are others
    others being plural
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    mmm nice one
     
  3. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    a thank you. i appreciate the compliment
     
  4. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    sorry i wasn't more enthusiastic. had a bit of a tiff with my closest friend at college...meep
    would you comment on my poem...if you can?
     
  5. floyd4peace

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    sure thing
     
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