not a love poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by floyd4peace, Nov 27, 2005.

  1. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    what's thought when it's not is true
    all accurate perceptions of you
    true feelings emerging
    from deep withing
    within the deepest pit of your shoe
    apart from deception
    accurate and true
    subconcious is key to you
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    makes me think...
     
  3. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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    really? sweet thanks...i hope thats good.....eh either way thanks
     
  4. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

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    i mean...it causes thoughts
    and
    hm
    still not making much sense!
    'subconcious is key to you' that's a good line
     
  5. floyd4peace

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    haha yeah..i was having an odd day really i was on a complete loss for words and that just kinda happened....
     
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