an extreamly bad poem haha

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ~peace~, Nov 30, 2005.

  1. ~peace~

    ~peace~ Senior Member

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    here is my very bad poem that doesnt rhyme properly but u get the idea ;)





    war isnt good, war is bad

    war is the worse thing we have ever had



    war only brings more evil into the world,

    and makes us want to hate more and more



    without war the world would be a better place

    where nobody would be picked on because of their race



    pleace be at peace and hope others will follow


    ~peace~
     
  2. Corvuspirit

    Corvuspirit Member

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    yep...i got the idea...and it is a fine ditty
     
  3. ~peace~

    ~peace~ Senior Member

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    yeah...the general idea is the concept of it lol
     

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